A Breach Of Friendship Comments

Very good poem, enjoyed reading it.

A piece of great elegance, exquisitely crafted with artistic brilliance. A masterful creation.......

Loved the satirical tone of the poem. 'Perhaps I should have argued there And proved her charges most unfair; But it was two, as I have said, And I was tired and wished for bed; So by the short route chose to steer, And all I said was: 'Yes, my dear.'' - The poet honestly confesses his failure to do what he was supposed to do. At the same time he clearly depicts how tiring it could be to live with a nagging wife!

I love this..............

Too Good......... Thanks for sharing.........

Breach Of Friendship. well penned, thanks for sharing

Who else was with you? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

'Men who have won their share of fame, That each one bears an honored name. Perhaps I should have argued there And proved her charges most unfair; '..are vry thought provoking lines. Enjoyed the lovely poem.

This was a pleasant narrative to read and wryly humorous for me, but as I finished it struck me it was lighter in feel than the first stanza led me to anticipate. -GK

Perhaps I should have pointed out That they are men beyond all doubt, Men who have won their share of fame, That each one bears an honored name.....touch tou expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem has been shared.