Saturday, September 21, 2013
A Brand New Start. Comments
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'What do you want to eat' he said
I saw the dark glint in his eyes
I knew whatever the choice I made
would be wrong and would cause a fight.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed
21 September 2013
nice poem with lovely concluding /Yes, tonight I'm going to leave him I'm praying for the dark. Tomorrow there'll be hope in sight I'll make a brand new start. thank sharing Maria keep it up
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9/6/2025 7:32:10 PM # 1.0.0
wow. powerful. I read it without trying to analyze for meter, feet, rhyme, style. It flowed and kept me reading. great work. I pray it wasn't from first hand experience.