Thursday, May 28, 2009

A Brand New End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking back on years past
After the little ones are grown
Life is just a journey,
You don't always travel alone
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RACHEL ZARANTONELLO
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Jones Jones 10 June 2009

Hi Rachel; A lovely poem filled with hope... It would present even better if you divided it into stanzas... Just a thought! Have an awesome day!

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