A Brand New Day Comments

Tia Maria Is that your real name? It is like your poem, it flows and it rhymes! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice

Bursting with beauty. Thanks for making my day.

Your poem is fresh and natural. I know and have lived this poem. You have a fan here in California. Good day to you Raymond

There may be a few clouds, along the way But they will make way, for a brand new day.........wonderful lines........Show must go on..........10+++

This poem opened my eyes, really liked it, im only young but i hope to develop as good as that

i love this poem it is deep and is the reality i would appreciate it if you could read some of my poems my regards

very interesting rhyme scheme, loved the poem overall, well written tx 4 sharin word

love the last two lines..I love the gentle flow of your words

I did enjoy this one. Some thoughts there from deep experience. Hope you read mine: 'Memory is a Cheating Thing' Adeline

Loved the flow and rhyme. A really good read for me early in the morning.Tea and Tia a great combination; -)

Marvelous poem. Last stanza is amazing. A moving composition with magnificent metaphors,10 for it.

Now this was a cheerful and delightful poem, great read! Loyd

Forward thinking in this piece of magic, yes a good write your future holds so much for you with this frame of mind, smiles ahead of yourself 10 Chris

I love the optimistic message expressed here. Ron

Brialliant use of use to express emotions. One of my favorite poems I've read today. Love the use of rhyme and seasons. Lovely piece of work.10/10

An optimist......straight from the soul! Excellent.

An excellent poem your rhyming's quite superb. It is only our thoughts that interfere to spoil our day and make us feel unhappy. Bob

All those unwanted thoughts of a grey yesterday........................... even when wrought of time past yet it sings the song imortal ahead of time life when flows in the plexus in space and time still it croons by the new day to be emblazoned...............interesting imagery of the life across timeand we talk of those passion yet unexpressed depicting the desire intoned, excellent work,10+, thanks for sharing

inspirational. loved it! !

Good poem. Keep writing!