Saturday, October 24, 2009

A Brand New Comments

Rating: 3.1

what i want, you cannot give
no memories that haunt, a normal life to live
to spend my days, finding a way........to regain
most of whats been lost
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

long poem just like a long brand new start..very keen insight

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Krista'lyntinia Lancelaotti 27 November 2009

very emotional, and in depth

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Kristina B'williams 10 November 2009

VERY LONG EPIC TALE, BUT VERY MEMERIZING...USUALLY I DONT READ POEMS THIS LONG, BUT THIS 1 LEFT ME WANTING MORE...I AM NOW A TRUE FAN OF YOUR WORKS, AND I LOOK 4WARD TO READING MORE..PLEASE BE A DEAR AND SEND ME INVITES....I DONT KNOW WHAT THIS RATING STUFF IS, BUT I AM GOING TO BASE IT ON THE FACT THAT 10 IS THE BEST, SO I GIVE YOU 10

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