Sunday, March 22, 2009

A Branch Shook Comments

Rating: 5.0

A branch shook.
A leaf detached itself
and fell
on to my verandah in the sunlight.
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Diana van den Berg
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Henry Brown 12 July 2009

Dianne Although this poem was written over 10 years ago it flows very well. I will look at some of your new work and vote and comment

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Gert Strydom 15 June 2009

These view words are really striking.

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Bob Blackwell 07 June 2009

I have just read this beautiful poem again, short sweet and very moving.

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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

The point was because of your love for nature you noticed.

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Sonya Florentino 12 April 2009

again so beautiful... something falls, then something flies....

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Alison Cassidy 28 March 2009

What can I say? You take a tiny moment in time and capture it for ever with eloquence and a soft brush. The reader can see the poet's eyes shining behind her words. A sheer delight. Love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

Good-bye captured in the fallen leaf and the flight of that unknown bird., But the sun never stopped shining. Lovely write. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Diana van den Berg

Diana van den Berg

Durban, South Africa
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