A Brace Of Budgies Comments

Very romantic, short but deep

A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly. Such sweet words that softens the hard headed! Thanks for a lovely write.

'In the red dream of your kiss' Rachel Ann Butler

rain, cloud, island and sea if a poem has one of those it could be good what do you think it a poem has all of those? 8++++++

Ths poem is so soft and gentle... LOVELYYY!

Very touching and gentle support, just a nightingale can sing a song... 10............. Tsira

You have a lovely way with words Nightingale and your poetry sings,10 Lynda xx

Lovely feeligs lovely expressions! ! ! sathya narayana

A very lovely love poem, where feelings can be 'touched' by the reader.10+, of course :)

...a 10 has been given to nightingle of shiraz with joy for this nice composition!

Without 'YOU', nothing you are, living without meaning, floating alone in the ocean of love and life...........lovely indeed.

Lovely way to express to someone how they complete you. Lovely written. Enjoyed it.

Without her you are alone, with an empty heart you carry, a 'red dream' - you'll never own Great read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

A very moving write enjoyed the softness of your pen and the harmony of your words thankyou Chris 10