Friday, July 3, 2009

A Boys Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Just inspired by experiences of others and my surroundings)

They see on the first glance and began to ake strategies to get into that girls pants.
They operate, stratergize and hallucinate their alternative ways and see what kind of girls could they get in a number count of days.
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Ahtivah Lawton
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2009

finger and marrying her every thought...this evry individual man may think interms of girl for marrying...lovely write....10 read mine individual...anywhere and butterflies around..

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~ Jon London ~ 06 July 2009

I think it pays in life to be street wise...I like the way you've gone about this piece...there's a lot of truth within......keep penning and expressing..you have a gift

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Brooke Luchich 05 July 2009

So true. Great poem =)

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Ahtivah Lawton

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