Saturday, May 11, 2019

A Boy's Fort Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fingernail dirt,
Pounding nails until fingers hurt,
Fixing that fort,
Climbing pines' mid-branch's small perch,
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Randall Vanlandingham
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Susan Williams 12 May 2019

Caught the child in mid-flight! ! ! ! Sheer poetry to read this saga concerning the building and use of fort making and making a man out of the boy! Well done!

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 May 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Randall Vanlandingham. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Randall Vanlandingham

Randall Vanlandingham

New Orleans, LA
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