A Boy Story Comments

Gloria, I'm not much on non rhythmic poetry however, this poem says a lot about the story of wanting and needing love. Very strongly written for someone so young. Very nice Job. Keep up the good work. Your New Poem Pal Lynn

very good and full of thoughts....keep impressing thnx for sharing

I like this. Cool perspective again. It kinda sounds like what you wish you could find in a guy. Sounds like that would be a pretty amazing person.

This is very nice, but did you make it in perspective of a boy to show how men need to be more in touch and should think this way?

I told her many times, but she never listened.. yet she's mine. That was good dear..carry on

well written, flows nicely

wow! thatz true we need guys to be more intouch with there emotional side........very creative......