Friday, July 11, 2014

A Boy And His Dog Comments

Rating: 5.0

He felt the warmth of his pup's fur as he softly pet his head down by his knee
A Basset Hound
Like the one on the box that matched his shoes
He looked up at the dental assitant as she walked through the door signaling that it was time for him to come to the back
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Kewayne Wadley
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Kevin Patrick 11 October 2015

Reading this I couldn't help think of my horrific trip to the dentist, the ripping off of one of my cavity gutted tooth and the smell of steel on flesh and metallic taste of blood, worse thing was I didn't get no lollipop. A really great story poem, it clearly draws a picture and the details are great. Its nice you got a sucker out of the ordeal.

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Kewayne Wadley

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Groton, Connecticutt
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