Monday, September 18, 2006

A Boy And A Wave Comments

Rating: 5.0

He stood on the hill looking down over the sea,
the tide was coming in and it was time for tea.
He was not hungry so he thought he would
stay a while more, but would he get caught by the
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sylvia spencer
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Vra Parody 29 September 2006

lovely...prose with poetry..an awesome combo

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Patrick Ladbrooke 28 September 2006

Compelling read and for once with the sea, a happy outcome. Patrick xx

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Duncan Wyllie 21 September 2006

AWESOME WRITE OF STRENGTH AND ENCOURAGEMENT, WHAT A BEAUTIFUL HAND THAT PLACED SUCH WORDS IT MUST BE OUR ONE AND ONLY.... SYLVIA SPENCER OR SIS AS I HAVE COME TO KNOW HER TOP CLASS POETRY FROM A TOP CLASS GIRL LOVE duncan XXXXXXX

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Kee Thampi 19 September 2006

Knee deep in sea water and salt in his eyes, he could not explain what came down from the skys. He was pulled from the sea then put on dry land, then someone stroaked him with a gentle hand. Take care my son were the words he said don't play with the tide just go home to bed. This Sylvia spencer use words very simply to panetrate a deep frightening -soaring pictures....

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Ernestine Northover 18 September 2006

Lovely poem, lovely ending, lovely storyline. Great read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 18 September 2006

As always, you make me think of the Oral Storytellers of Olden days, when there were no writers, just Storytellers, the ones who could take a simple story and tell it to a group of listeners and make it something to be remembered! You are a true STORYTELLER!

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

A poem of grace and gentle strength. What wonderful imagry!

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Sandra Fowler 18 September 2006

A poem of extraordinary beauty. Very consoling and inspiring. You are such a gifted story teller. It would be impossible not to be touched by this one. Love from your sister and friend, Sandra

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

sylvia...my husband had this experience when he was 10 and was saved by a kind fisherman...he read the poem and liked it a lot...love...nalini

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