A Boy Comments

a good narrative...a bit longer than i had assumed it would be but excusable and understanable due to the subject matter

i love it, and thank you for asking me to read this poem.

Wow, I loved the story although it is very sad. Very weell writen.

A bully plague is in every town and you have brought it to the fore great poem on this subject...... when 12 I tackled the school bully for hitting a weaker boy and received a broken femur... well done regards

This really gripping and moving, best poem i've seen in years I love it but nearly made me cry well done xxx

Lindsey, what a superbly written and moving poem, it gripped me and kept me hooked all the way through. FANTASTIC! ! ! !

Has a lot of reality in it. Happens much to a lesser degree in schools. BUT, kids are kids.

Lindsey, this poem is amazing - it has brought out the worst side of bullying so effectively - I hope this sad social menace is finally stopped with serious punishment being awarded to the guilty 10+ from me and thanks for drawing my attention to your work

Lindsey this is as dramatic and provocative as a poem can get....you have penned this one with the detail of a brillaint screenplay....most poignant, powerful, and a social advocacy message as well for anti-bullying measures

aw that's a really fantastic poem so beautifully sad

a moving and an awesome verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You drived speechless, your an amazing writter! ! ! ! OMG! ! ! Its a really really nice poem but its also sad.Personaly, i think that bulliers have to be punished.It was a pleasure to read the poem! Keep on writing! ! Jenny

Brought tears to my eyes.10.

Quite a work of art.

wow... wow... I dont even know what to say but that is magnificent… incredible and it made me teary eyed.phenomenal job. Becca

This is such a sad poem, Lindsey, but unfortunately it happens often. The bullying in schools simply must stop, whether it is verbal or physical. Schools need to take a stand against it and do whatever it takes to stop it. Your poem shows the worst of what can happen. Bless you! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

I found this a very emotional one to read....especially in the current climate of turning away from each other...well written thank you....Fi

awww....so sad. you have very good talent. Hope it is a poem and not real..... Thanks for the read...very emotional.. -Brie

This is very good, I found it most enjoyable to read...

omigawd, this is such a sad poem. i hope this teaches ppl a lesson! i mean, i really do feel like crying..so yeah..i'm not surprized billy did. oh, lindsey your amazing.i wanna read some more! ! keep it up and good work. best poem/story ever! May