Friday, May 22, 2009

A Bowl Of Rice Always Comments

Rating: 4.8

A fractured home
A distanced heartache

A chopstick, an empty cup
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Martin Swords
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Adeline Foster 20 September 2009

Lovely! What this said to me was that the imbibing was done and the meal would follow Adeline

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Sonya Florentino 06 September 2009

the pea...underneath the mattresses...?

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Indira Renganathan 15 August 2009

The two lines first and the two last speak a lot...heart stirring...thank you

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Siglinde Good 21 July 2009

Such a lonely ambiance. Perfectly stitched togther. Short and straight. Very good

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I felt a sense of melancholy when I saw these words and items left on a white page. They spoke volumes that many often complicated words cannot emulate. 10 Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm 23 May 2009

Always and seemingly ever the small things in any time or aid are given to such as you highlight here Martin - - what shame on us all...

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Tiglin, Wicklow, Ireland
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