Sunday, May 24, 2009

A Bowl, A Coin, A Mat Comments

Rating: 2.9

He sat there near the white pillar, waiting
For a coin to dropp into the tin bowl
Dented, indented with hazy souvenirs
He waited on his thick cotton mat for a coin
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Rani Turton
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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

A real time life imagery...reads sad, Rani...talking piece...thanks...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Wonderful, you have painted this piece in such a way that we can as if see it very clearly.10+++

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