Friday, August 24, 2012

A Bow And An Arrow.. Comments

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The bent bows are the eye brows,
the Piercing eyes are the arrows,
Those who are shot, still trapped,
Punctured are not their thoughts,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Geetha Jayakumar 22 July 2013

Beautiful poem...Really enjoyed reading it. Each line is expressed so well.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 03 September 2012

Within the eye you'll see the truth... sparkle of love... I like this poem.

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 August 2012

The piercing eyes work wonders to make the bond strong and the love true so that the usual doubts can not sever the hearts.

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 August 2012

The eyebrows and the piercing eyes work wonders to flight their wings. The usual doubts are like snow in the sun. The bonds are strong because of true love. which force can sever them?

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Valsa George 26 August 2012

The early days of bliss and charm is soon doused by the bitter realities of life and arguments prop up among the couple. Those who are truely bonded in love emerge as winners and their love remains pure as snow! ! I assume that this is what you meant! A salient truth expressed beautifully! A great job!

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