Tuesday, October 1, 2024

A Bouquet Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am yr virgin white, baby breath
Contrasting yr rose
With the colour of a whore's red lips
As we sit in a vase wilting
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Nosheen Irfan 05 October 2024

What a great metaphorical piece! Beauty meets a terrible end. That's the truth of life!

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Anjandev Roy 01 October 2024

Absolutely brilliant and perfect..... thank u... LeeAnn....

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Rob Lamberton 01 October 2024

…I would pick them up too. And put them back in the vase with fallen petals beside.

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Rob Lamberton 01 October 2024

Even dried up flowers maintain a certain color and delicacy. I would pick them up

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Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2024

This cutting poem would make a great addition to a movie like War of the Roses!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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