Tuesday, December 16, 2008

A Boundless Lovers Hate Comments

Rating: 5.0

The placement of her hands upon her chin.
Such sweet serenity beneath the skin.
Sublime evil plotting her divine spin.
So easily lain down thoughtless provoke.
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Brad Kellum
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Stephanie Souter 16 December 2008

WOW! ! Beautiful poem! ! Vivid images and good job conecting to the sence' of the reader i give it a 9.5 (i rarely give out realy hight scores like this)

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