A Bottle Of You. Comments

This is a wonderful poem and an awesome and perfect title. really, really like this. marci.m.

I can relate and understand the feeling, Good Job! ! !

4. OK, so your conceit is woman = bottle of wine. Not the most original in the world so for it to work you need good original strong imagery, but the particular images you chose aren't working. (i.e. not the most original/strong/detailed.) Otherwise, it needs tightening - there is wordiness.

clear from the very title

I think you can do better than this. It's not bad, but it doesn't evoke strong feelings.