Wednesday, October 10, 2012

A Bottle Away Comments

Rating: 4.8

Every girl's a bottle away
Every girl never does what they say

The lies forgotten
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William K Duncan
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Alexander Coppedge 24 March 2013

A wonderful piece of poetry You have enormous potential Your out look is expressed well in ink

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Romeo Della Valle 11 October 2012

The day you were born, poetry was reborn again and this clear fact is revealed in this well crafted and thought provoking first write! WELCOME to the Poetry World dear William! Your talent and writing skills is shown in this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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A B 10 October 2012

g8...thoughts nicely put together...well written

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