Monday, October 15, 2018

A Botched Up Experiment Comments

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I tried to force
Myself
To write,
A poem on a subject
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Sandra Feldman
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Bill Cantrell 15 October 2018

So very true Sandra, but as doors open in our poetry..and they will...the poet grows...but the essence I think stays basically the same, as if words were made of fragile white plaster..that is the part of you describing the artificial feeling that comes with trying to change our essence, very good way of putting it...great job! !

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