Monday, March 26, 2012

A Borrowed Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me, O Lord
A few more songs.
My fire is dying,
Give me a spark.
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Shiv Kumar Batalvi
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

Congratulations to the close family for being honoured as The Modern Poem Of The Day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

A Borrowed Song, a great poem full of melancholy and great sadness and greatest pain.5 Full Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

True sad poem full of melancholy, this poem is not metaphored, the sufferings had been true. Poor great world famous poet, died too young 35 years young

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Chinedu Dike 16 October 2021

An insightful creation....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2021

A beautiful and deeply moving poem embellished with compelling images and wonderful metaphors.

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Bhoomika Jain 19 March 2019

Touching emission of pain that a heart like him must be going through, with amazing metaphors.

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Shiv Kumar Batalvi

Shiv Kumar Batalvi

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