Saturday, December 1, 2012

A Bored Apple Seed............[humor, I Hope] Comments

Rating: 4.0

While sitting in our screen house I spit out one apple seed.
You'd think it would be grateful since from my mouth it had been freed.
But no, you ungrateful seed. Instead you turned and looked at me,
a frown upon your face, indeed!
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Bri Edwards
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Bharati Nayak 23 July 2022

It is my third or fourth read.I wonder why I had not commented on this poem or somehow my comment did not appear (It really happened on many occasions) .I must congratulate Bri Edwards for such an interesting poem. Bri can read mind of seeds.

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John Brown 08 February 2015

Really comical Bri. I like it. Did you know that 'Nyjer' used to be spelt 'Niger'? It was changed by the seed companies to avoid offending coloured / black people. I'm never sure which term to use these days... mad ain't it?

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V P Mahur 07 April 2014

Dear Sir, Nice one this is. Thanks!

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