A Boon Sugar Cane Comments

The last line is a bit bizarre tho another version of life!

...........but primal harmony, drawn by thirst of sweetness, abundant.. great

Thank you sharing this beautiful poem. It is sweet to thought

A poignant inscription has been made. Sweetness in reading as sugar cane. Thanks for sharing.10

Bitterness is increasing in the golden crops, let us rotate the crops forgetting the gold, let me grow sugar cane, I know the art of making silver crystals from sugar canes. If sweetness I get from silver, I don't want gold.

Beautiful, i like this one lots, beautiful written. Good work.

To understand the depth of the write I had to go through the poem twice to enjoy the way it is crafted and titled!

Nicely worded and written, Yoonoos. Thanks

Sweetness! With the muse of life. Nice work.

This poem is very well thought out and expertly written. It was very... Stimulating to read, thanks for a great poem my friend.

its the first poem that i read on poemhunter

You are a different, but tasting together? Who are you then?

this is a poem which made me think and it's really great: -)

this is beautiful my friend, an undisputed evidence of old is gold my brother.

this one kept me thinking, kept me digging deep, really a beautiful poem

Ambitious and daring. Study John Donne as the master of metaphysical poetry (and love poetry, religious verse) . Try to avoid words like albeit, manifestation, etc. That could however be means may. Brave excursion; keep at it! (See also George Herbert.) drd

hmmm a big and wonderful projection of God's gift i love it

Wonderful deep soul searching scribe, I am overjoyed to see you are still writing- An ardent fan.x

A very soul searching poem, full of original metaphors, and deep feelings.

u have made poetry as a sacred ritual of thoughts....................no words to describe