Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Sunday, September 9, 2012

A Boomerang Comments

Rating: 4.8

I threw a boomerang to hurt you
It returned to me and hurt me too
Now I want you in my life again
But now my efforts are all in vain
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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 December 2012

well written.... in pain....

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Kanav Justa 12 December 2012

To accept our own mistake is the hardest thing to do... well done

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Sarojini Pattayat 14 October 2012

very emotional poem. I think man are maker and breaker.

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Mauta Peter 13 October 2012

A heart felt realization of love gone by the wind, keep on weaving!

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Amos Greig 12 October 2012

A rather visual description of the harm we sometimes bring into our relationships.

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Anita Sehgal 16 September 2012

great write... regret well expressed

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Chettur Aishwarya Shrivastav 15 September 2012

touching and you write wonderful.. keep it up..

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Black On Black Arts 15 September 2012

thats a graet way of expressing love and losing love fantastic

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Danny Draper 12 September 2012

A poem of self assessment that shows the getting of wisdom through self deprecating honesty.

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Mark Dillon 12 September 2012

well expressed.you have to remember, what goes around comes around.just like your boomerang.

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Francisca Darko 11 September 2012

The beginning and ending stanzas are very heartfelt

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Constance K Yost 11 September 2012

One needs to be very careful with that boomerang, even in your poetry.

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Aynton Clemmons 10 September 2012

Its a really nice poem

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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