Tuesday, March 18, 2008

A Bookmark As A Present For A Departing Friend Comments

Rating: 3.0

Time is a wonderful thief who steals everything from us?
Shining spring comes through the fallen leaves
And the willy-nilly flowers bloom merrily.
Famous birds sing and the deep rivers flow quietly.
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Diana Van Den Berg 27 February 2009

Your pen is dipped in delicate magic! What a beautiful tribute for Paul Newman.

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Abha Sharma 20 March 2008

'My carefree hidden wise Master, please do not pull this miraculous season away until I finish the tiresome journey.' life goes while springs come and go But you spring will ever blow. ........ Indeed a good expression.

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Alison Cassidy 19 March 2008

I love the way you have balanced the lyrical and the tedious in this enchanting poem about changing seasons and the inevitability of death. 'Time is a wonderful thief who steals everything from us' is brilliant. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 18 March 2008

It would be difficult to read this eloquent offering and remain unmoved. But one could hope that the writer will not lay his pen down for many springs to come. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 March 2008

this is a token of life..............

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