A Book That Wouldn't Open Comments
Rise up, pages!
Open to my finger-pulls!
Take me inside where I want to be,
to some fantastic world
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2 – ok, i read again down till i came to " flut" in your poem. what, i wonder, is wrong/not good about using" flutter" ? ! bri :) I’ll read another of yours.
Hi. " Will not flut" mirrors " thing stays shut" in that line. I shortened it for the sound. - Jenny
1 – i sent your poem title and name out to a bunch of my PH friends (along with other titles from MyPoemList) . i now see your comment (below) about " flut" ; you are forgiven. just DON'T do it again! ! " form men and women, dogs" ...it sounds like you are equating men and women to dogs. well there ARE A LOT (ok, some) similarities. i married a once.
" and when I woke, I was inside the book.." this snuck up on me and gave me a good sharp laugh! i only found " flut" as a noun: " (often followed by `of') a large number or amount or extent" [not glut? ? ] " flit - move swiftly and lightly." You seem happy? ? with your fate. who will join you? to MyPoemList bri :)
Thank you for reading! I used " flut" as a shortened form of flutter. (Confusing, sorry!) . - Jenny
Fantastic poem, one of the best I have read in a long while. Your imaginative mind shows very well in this verse.10+
Thank you so very much! I'm very happy to have your compliments! - Jenny
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Wonderful to read. It was the title that captured me.
Thank you, Lyn! - Jenny K