Dawn in the valley.
A chilling fear now rises
like an emotional, ominous cloud.
It soon disperses in the mist,
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If death must come so be it, but with mercy to the innocent, I could not agree more.Long life and happiness to you Herbert.As we walk through life I often feel that It should have been done slower so as to savour precious moments and reduce our fatal mistakes.love Duncan
I agree, A terrific ending to an intelligent and thought provoking poem. xx
What a terrific ending! I see it fading now, the print from this computer, and heat has come at last, to sweep us with the dust into forgetfulness and purple raven nights I say good-bye to you and will you understand? Linda
Powerful poem....peolpe do not realize what they creat till it's too late. Great write!
We do not realize until it is to late. Very frightening poem but all too real. KK