Tuesday, June 28, 2005

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Dawn in the valley.
A chilling fear now rises
like an emotional, ominous cloud.
It soon disperses in the mist,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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K K 06 March 2007

We do not realize until it is to late. Very frightening poem but all too real. KK

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Duncan Wyllie 19 February 2006

If death must come so be it, but with mercy to the innocent, I could not agree more.Long life and happiness to you Herbert.As we walk through life I often feel that It should have been done slower so as to savour precious moments and reduce our fatal mistakes.love Duncan

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Tallie Kane 18 January 2006

I agree, A terrific ending to an intelligent and thought provoking poem. xx

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Linda Hepner 31 July 2005

What a terrific ending! I see it fading now, the print from this computer, and heat has come at last, to sweep us with the dust into forgetfulness and purple raven nights I say good-bye to you and will you understand? Linda

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 June 2005

Powerful poem....peolpe do not realize what they creat till it's too late. Great write!

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