I want to keep my head down,
To utter my prayer for us.
Let, fill us with pure light,
Let us be as sober as grass.
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Nice one, dear Nilakshi Das, a form of spirituality and the need for awareness of the left-behind traces or footprints.
spiritual and demanding.....the way is shown in no uncertain terms....the path to eternity, the path to nirvana.... prophetic and well written liked it cheers
Our lives without footprints are miserable. Man's quest is to make impact. This tallies with my poem: I Want To Be A Life Line
A nice standard Let, fill us with pure light, sadly we are born pure and so many go off the beaten track but thanks to your kind that shout out for a crystal mind.thanks or this regards
I liked this, don`t understand the review from Romeo Vishal, who can`t be bothered to write decent English and seems to deduce a meaning from your poem that is not there...If you have some kind of problem, get it fixed - you don`t have to try and sort it out here, I thought this site is about literature, not about social networks.....
this poem is so Becoming and yet Dulcet.......an amazing piece i must say loved it thank you for sharing it love payal
...our footprints are ways for others to trace back our sins and virtues.....great wrk dear, this poem was a nice one to read