there, there...down there
through a thicket of fog
beckoned a vacant boat
i fought through the fog
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You capture the readers' interest until the very end in this surreal piece...good write Indira.
May I too join you in your boat ride. I can take the oars.
so soothing....so beautiful..............................
Real dreaming in spate of words....no doubt that you're an adept at surrealistic poetry..exciting...thanks a lot