Friday, December 18, 2009

A Boat-Ride, Surreal Comments

Rating: 3.0

there, there...down there
through a thicket of fog
beckoned a vacant boat
i fought through the fog
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indira babbellapati
fog
COMMENTS
Indira Renganathan 21 December 2009

Real dreaming in spate of words....no doubt that you're an adept at surrealistic poetry..exciting...thanks a lot

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Sandra Martyres 20 December 2009

You capture the readers' interest until the very end in this surreal piece...good write Indira.

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Ranjit Ravindran 18 December 2009

May I too join you in your boat ride. I can take the oars.

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 18 December 2009

so soothing....so beautiful..............................

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indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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