Thursday, June 11, 2009

A Boat Passing By Comments

Rating: 4.5

(A senryu)

A boat passing by:
on the shore where lovers lie
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Rory Hudson
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Raj Arumugam 24 June 2009

peaceful...gentle...lovely...

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This is so beautifully peaceful. The words you have used are particularly restful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Gert Strydom 15 June 2009

These few words portray a great sense of reality.

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Rory Hudson

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