Saturday, July 18, 2015

A Boat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the leaking sky
I built up boat sailing
Between you and me
And tied a rope against your sighs
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Bharati Nayak 20 July 2015

Emotions oscillate between hope and doubt- - -Love is always like that. Nice penning.

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Hazel Durham 19 July 2015

A conflict of emotions beautifully penned with lovely imagery!

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