Friday, December 8, 2017

A Blues For Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stop talking, leave me alone.
Keep the silence, let me catch the sun.
I'm staring at her. A smile, that smile.
A strong reason to live.
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Evi Koroni
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Rajnish Manga 19 May 2018

Nice poem reflecting the passion as well as the quest and resolve of a lover to achieve a goal which, at first sight, looks impossible. There is a whiff of fresh air in the expression. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 May 2018

good poem but if only the selectors had edited it a bit it would havebeen more delicious then eating the hot sun in silence

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2018

I watch her. A smile, that's smile A strong reason to live. This is the day, the noon, the sunset, the midnight. Oh god, she looks so frail I'm afraid to touch her. Questions are torturing my mind today and keep me awake all the night.- - - - - -The question tortures me- - - -The sun, the life force , also goes through blues- -Does she embrace her pillow to get solace? Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

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Lyn Paul 15 May 2018

Beautiful it is to feel that sun in a peaceful environment forgetting our woes just dreaming. Thank you

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 15 May 2018

Let me catch the sun! That's a bold line....10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2018

A strong reason to live! ! Let me catch the sun! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Frank Sheehan 15 May 2018

Wonderful poem. Very sensual and creative. Enjoyed immensely.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 15 May 2018

Romance work better in solitude. No one should talk to her. Let us leave her alone, for dreaming. Well penned love poem. Congrats for being selected as the members PoD. X

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Tom Allport 15 May 2018

a poem of loving feeling's that for now are being kept quiet? .................well penned Evi

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

Stop talking, none is talking to me now Keep the silence, let me dream that sun. ........ touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Britte Ninad 15 May 2018

it seems lonely but in colloquial style description this poem is - nicely penned

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Akhtar Jawad 15 May 2018

A Blues For Her is a popular poem by a Greek poetess, it's in English, I wish I could understand Greek to read her poems in Greek. A woman dreaming a sun that could be kissed, she must not be disturbed, and there should be a pin drop silence as she is a poetess. Wait for a poetic dawn, she will be awaken with a nice poem. And here is that poem. Congrats!

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 May 2018

Hi Evi, Congrats on selection as poet of the day. A well deserved achievement, for this beautiful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2018

How is her kiss? How is her walk? How is her breath when she is sleeping? .very romantic full of passion and feelings.. thank u dear poetess. congrats for POD

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2018

Dear Evi, such a well expressed poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen.... huge 10++++

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Muzahidul Reza 15 May 2018

love for beloved / lover oneday will take near love for humanity, creatures, ...... i believe, fantasfic love poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Katie Holten 10 December 2017

I adore this line Keep the silence, let me catch the sun. So many meanings, so many feelings. I particularly like the parrallel first two and last two lines. Great

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Jeffrey West 09 December 2017

I like it. Nice poem.10++++ Very emotional

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Ariel Loiret 08 December 2017

I love to read your poems. They are very emotional, so real

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