Tuesday, September 19, 2006

A Blueprint Of How It Was Comments

Rating: 4.8

photograph this now
because I don’t think it
will last for very
long.
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Ben Partenay
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Seamus O Brian 21 November 2016

Another gem, good sir. I am certainly enjoying my perusal of your anthology.

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totally disturbed 23 November 2008

I really enjoyed reading your words you write very well.. Wendy

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Life is a flickering series of images that will pass us by, so preserve them now or forever lose them. Great poem, I'm glad I got to read it.

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Wow.Beautifully written! ^.^ I love this one! *adds to favorites*

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 24 September 2007

this poem is beautiful, it shows how important we should take what is here now very serious. i love it.

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Michael Shepherd 16 March 2007

Ben, I'm working through your poems, but this is a great start..

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Alfredo Jacques 29 November 2006

just wanted to say great poem

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Kailynd McGregor 02 October 2006

I really do love this poem, great job. I have a poem kind of like this one! ~Kailynd

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Lauren Michaels 27 September 2006

I really love this poem its sweet and sort of resounding. I like the feeling of poignant finality and sorry acceptance. Lovely Regards, Lauren

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Ernestine Northover 19 September 2006

This is quite beautiful Ben. A dreamy poem, capturing that moment before it disappears into the past. Delightful. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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