Monday, January 8, 2007

A Bluebottle Comments

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The bluebottle has a very pretty color to it
As you sit in a quite room and you can hear the buzzing
As the bluebottle flies around
Then it lands on your arm and you feel a tickle from its tongue
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jessica roberts
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Brian Dorn 11 January 2007

Interesting choice of subject matter, Jessica. At first, I wasn't quite sure what a 'bluebottle' was, but you certainly brought it to life. Uniquely different and very well written! ! Brian

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