Sunday, May 17, 2015

A Blue Sky Wedding Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon was wandering in the dim sunlight,
Incomplete and looking for a charming Miss Right,
His father sun, recollecting his own lovely days,
His mother earth, still wet with his rays,
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Indira Renganathan 03 October 2017

You are blessed to imagine brilliantly Akhtar.....lovely thinking...lovely poem....excellent craft....thanks for sharing

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Hazel Durham 24 May 2015

With your great imagination you have created a feast of stunning imagery that is a joy to read!

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Bisma Mirza 23 May 2015

Very Very Beautiful.......... really Amazing! ! ! 10 on 10.............

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Mark Heathcote 18 May 2015

Nicely written enjoyed your poem sir thanks for sharing it.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 May 2015

A beautiful imagination converted in a lovely poem..................10

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Valsa George 18 May 2015

Akhtar ji, you make lovely alliances! The readers get the feel of having attended a celestial wedding! Enjoyed!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 May 2015

A great imagery, groovy write. Beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks deare sir, may G od bless you and your family.

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