Moon was wandering in the dim sunlight,
Incomplete and looking for a charming Miss Right,
His father sun, recollecting his own lovely days,
His mother earth, still wet with his rays,
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With your great imagination you have created a feast of stunning imagery that is a joy to read!
Very Very Beautiful.......... really Amazing! ! ! 10 on 10.............
A beautiful imagination converted in a lovely poem..................10
Akhtar ji, you make lovely alliances! The readers get the feel of having attended a celestial wedding! Enjoyed!
A great imagery, groovy write. Beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks deare sir, may G od bless you and your family.
You are blessed to imagine brilliantly Akhtar.....lovely thinking...lovely poem....excellent craft....thanks for sharing