A tale of two weddings
wonderfully writ,
weddings have so many
secret tales to tell,
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The tragic winners and losers in the the game of love with wedding bells to heavens or hells and the poem opens up a can of worms that in reality are so real and sad++++10 regards
I really liked this poem. Read it a few times just to see if it read the same way. Nice poem.
great poem! as everrone's said, this happens all the time, on loser whos only gift is pain and despair, and one winner who is showered with love and wedding gifts much nicer than the gifts given to the loser. well done!
As Princess Diana said ' There were three of us in this marriage' Sometimes one of the contestents loses... Great poem... colin J...
One winner and one loser. The loser is left with the pain, while the happy wedded couple ride off into the sunset. An experience that usually happens to most people at sometime or another. A good write. Lynn
Fantastic style to write on love.... That has really made me think for a moment about what I am experiencing these days... Thanks a lot for your pen...
the image of the poem is like reality of love and hate; faith and unbeliefe...human being is unique experiece...and we indeed living in contrast of light and shadows.
depart on romantic honeymoon for two one left unloved can only rue, ...............................ingenious write by imagery, wonderfully curved by truth of reason,10++, thanks for sharing
Its great. When I read it I could feel the emotions building up.
it's like a stormy moment... you write like a classical poet here, like Shakespeare and the others... great!
Enjoyed reading. Nice one.