Tuesday, April 1, 2014

A Blue Jewel On Black Velvet Comments

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planet earth is my special home, and this home I love
the mountains I love, the desert I love, and the sea I love
and I especially love, fluffy white clouds above!
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Fer Onti 22 May 2018

I liked how you put the title, blue jewel equals earth, black velvet equals universe.

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Bharati Nayak 12 July 2016

You show so much care and love for your home and this blue planet, our home to all living creatures.Very beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 17 May 2014

Good morning Rachel. This was a very delightful poem, I loved it and the earth I call home. PS: Thanks for all your reviews and comments on my work. Loyd

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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 May 2014

Smilingly lovely! Fresh and smoothly flowing. Thank you for it.

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Sandra Feldman 29 April 2014

I feel the same way, But you said it, In.such a Special Way To be remembered, Everyday!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 26 April 2014

I enjoyed my walk with you. Thanks for takin' me along.

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Rishabh Bidya 12 April 2014

The explanation for the pride we feel for 'Mother earth'. Hats off, Sunprincess.: D

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Kanav Justa 11 April 2014

, , , when we live in a house, , , we will love it more than any other house of that city , , , , , when we compare two cities we would praise the city where we live at, , , , as we zoom out, , , we would love the country where we live in , , and like it more than other country, , , but once as we start to love our planet (our true home) as a whole irespective of the place where we live at, , , , , what a wonderful thing that would be, , , here in this poem i see, , what a beautiful perception you have about our earth, , and your love for earth is pure

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

Blue jewel on Black velvet........yo are an expert is titles! ! .............I appreciate your feeling and love for your home....blessed are those who know their roots! .....lovely write`..

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Valsa George 07 April 2014

Blessed are those who feel pleasure and pride in one's home..... Let this 'blue jewel' with precious human life in it continue to adorn the universe.... A lovely write! !

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Daniel Brick 06 April 2014

I was immediately drawn to read this poem because the title is such a vivid image - it's like a haiku - a poem complete in just one image. But I was surprised that you fleshed it out into a poem embracing all of Spring in May/June, the loveliest 8 weeks on our jewel of a planet surrounded by night. Do you know Ezra Pound's poem IN A STATION OF THE METRO? In about 1910 he reduced a 30 line poem to: The apparition of these faces in the crowd; /Petals on a wet, black bough. Amazing! That's why he's considered one of the creators of Modern Poetry!

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Patricia Grantham 05 April 2014

Comparing your home to a blue jewel on earth. Very good thoughts and feelings. Home is where the heart is. A sweetly composed write. Poets are rich here on PH. We receive a lot of valuable thoughts, comparisons, inspiration, exposure and a tremendous amount of talents and support.

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Amitava Sur 05 April 2014

What a wonderful poem it is where your first priority of love is with your home... sweet home. I like the line...... I am enjoying my home this planet is special, this blue jewel is my home! .... very nice

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2014

all of these aspects of home, are life's necessity anywhere on earth I roam, I am enjoying my home this planet is special, this blue jewel is my home! Lovely feeling, lovely thoughts, lovely poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 April 2014

Earth is our home and we must enjoy every part of it. Beautifully conveyed in the poem. Thank you.

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