Tuesday, January 29, 2019

A Blouse That Wows Comments

Rating: 3.8

She saw it as smart-fit sporty blouse,
But poor she, it drew forth parents' grouse.
When asked this was her take:
It's all for students' sake,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 January 2020

and what of this she composed on her trousers flee.. mine would stand up ma'am if mine underwear ran along with ma pants trousers attention read some of ma poems

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 January 2020

Oh dear PP, We might be of the same age, but I am no more as imaginative as you still are, (which is of course praise worthy) , but I am not sure how to respond to your feedback, for I do not think I fully understand it.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 February 2019

Beauty has a desire of exposure in its nucleus but properties depend on the electrons orbiting in the various orbits of the society. We are known by our properties not by our hidden nucleus. a nice and meaningful Limerick.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 February 2019

Very true, it has been found that beauty in nature has been the outcome and chemical reaction of light, say photo-synthesis that adds colours and beauty to flowers and leaves. If so, beauty cannot remain in dark. Thank you Akhtar Jawad

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 January 2020

...And your well thought out thoughts compelled me to visit again (thanks to PP) . Beauty may have some desire to expose, but beauty is beauty because of what it hides rather than exposes. As a great poet you would appreciate, imagination is more fertile than what all is revealed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2019

An amazing Limerick! Enjoyed the humor................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 January 2019

Thank you again Dr Swain.

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