Tuesday, August 4, 2009

A Blooming Shame Comments

Rating: 3.5

Still fields of scarlet poppies blow
on long abandoned battle fields.
The bones of dead men hid below
will feed their roots increasing yields.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Adeline Foster 22 May 2014

Well said! Read mine -Time For Another - Adeline

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 February 2011

Brilliant piece. Try 'Poppies' when you've a few spare seconds.

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Clarence Prince 09 November 2010

This is great piece of work, Ivor. It's a lovely poem to read; especially the last verse, I really like it.

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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

This is a very powerful piece, it really hurt me deep inside. A lover of peace and a veteran of war it seems we all have become. Its the people that pay for the heartlessness of governments. History keeps repeating time and time again. Every soldier is a hero I will read this many times, thank you very much Michael

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Robert Howard 27 October 2009

A noble elegy of homage and regret. It calls to my mind Wilfred Owen's question, 'Was it for this the clay grew tall? '

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

It's a good poem. Very engaging for the sentimental sort.

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C. P. Sharma 04 October 2009

An apt title, inductively developed theme, universal and lovely conclusion if the polity lends ears. 'Man may come and man may go' But history ever repeats it so. Best regards, CP

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

There are no winners in a war. There never was nor will there be. Rachel Ann Butler

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It is a shame that we won't quite killing each other.... I loved the poetry.

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Annabel Sheila 14 August 2009

I absolutely LOVED this poem! What an beautiful tribute to Veterans, and indeed a sad reminder of how humans perpetuate the ugliness of war! You are absolutely correct in that 'there are no winners'. Great lyrical flow (my favourite style of poetry) . Your words are clear and concise and one doesn't have to guess at the meaning of your poem. Awesome write! !

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C. P. Sharma 11 August 2009

So true, history keeps on repeating, man never learns from it and never feels ashamed of it. As usual, you are on the highest poetic pedestal with an eloquent conclusion, There are no winners in a war. There never was nor will there be. But men will fight for evermore. It’s human nature seemingly. CP

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Reshma Ramesh 04 August 2009

a great write sir........thanks for sharing

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Catrina Heart 04 August 2009

Men are still killing other men but now much more efficiently Each year we fail to learn again the lessons taught by history. There are no winners in a war. There never was nor will there be. But men will fight for evermore. It’s human nature seemingly. --------- couldn't say more for you have explained in details...great thoughts and wisdom here...well rhyme verses...Thanks! ! ! 10+++++++++

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