Monday, March 31, 2008

A Bloody Stain Comments

Rating: ★3.3

I looked and saw a bloody stain as if it came from me
It was thick and red and seemed to ooze out from my own belly
Then another spot upon one leg and another on my chest
I was climbing up a stairway and just couldn’t find my breath
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David Keig
red swimming
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Susan Williams 21 September 2018

I then stood straight and shouted – I shouted right out loud ‘I will not retreat just for fear for I am strong and proud’

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Lyn Paul 09 June 2013

So worth a 10 yet couldn't raise it..

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Lyn Paul 09 June 2013

Excellent and descriptive tale. So well done.

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David Keig

David Keig

UK
David Keig
David Keig
UK
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