Wednesday, April 4, 2012

A Bloodless War Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are living in war times
You can't see the blood though
The air is thick with it.
We are right, we are better
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 November 2014

Silent, bloodless but more macabre! this is cold war that may end up in gruesome and horrifying manner....... Very insightful indeed

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Muhammad Ali 17 January 2014

You are right dear poet. Now there are more space and paths for negative charges. I should think, what i should do! Hmm. I think, first, i should win a battle, in a battlefield inside me.

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Adeline Foster 25 October 2013

Yes deep, in answer read mine -. Time for. Another - Adeline

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Caty Prager 16 July 2013

You're very deep.....and I don't mean just this poem, the stuff you write is awesome!

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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012

So true.... this made my tummy drop...the tie up line is perfect for this piece...tyvm karen

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