A Bloodful Of Tears: An Ode To My Generation Comments

in this rat race no one is winner.and even if you win still u are rat..........Good Write..........Sourav.........

An extremely detailed creative write...well put, thanks

Inspiration is the first provocative for writing poem for a natural poet. You have joined the group of poets with this flow of words about what you have decided to say. Good! Read other best poets' expressions; you will know how to develop your ideas in a better way and express in poems that will find a place in everyone's heart which is most important and there lies the real success of a poet in the literary world!

This is quite an ambitious poem, Sourav, and I could tell it was written in a rush of inspiration. The tale it tells, quite effectively, I might add, is a parable for our time and indeed a statement not only of your generation, but of many generations as well. I don't wish to be presumptious, but I think your fascinating poem needs a little fine tuning and polishing before it can be considered complete. There are some mis-spellings to correct and some phrases could use a little tweaking. It is a good habit once one has written a poem, not to post it immediately in the flush of inspirtation that created it. Let it sit for a day, come back and read it again, looking for errors and ways to make it better. Beethoven himself, great genius that he was, would never be satisfied with his initial draft of a composition, but rather would go over it again and again, looking for ways to make it better if not perfect. Many experienced poets do this also, and most of them are whom we consider the greatest poets who ever lived. Your poem is a fine one that has the potential to be a great one with a little more 'tweaking' or work. You have the talent to make it a great one if you want to. Carl.

a war poem, good to read

A very thoughtful and vividly composed.......the rock of your 'generation'.

very great... really wonderful... full of meanings... WONDERFUL...BEAUTIFUL...AMAZING nice, , , , , , , , , , ,

Nice work.Liked it.Keep it up.

A very touchy composition, love it.