A Blood Relation Comments

We are human! all moving too well will turn us into perfect! I like the choice of words

family today in this world of technology we need order a place of patience and understanding...you said 'There is definite push and pull mechanism It is equally good to have bond in humanism It least somewhere we show some kind of attachment' In-laws, are sometimes better then blood relation...you have open many path of the mind and heart....very good write...we need to know what we need to help us...as blood relation's...thank you for helping me out...eye's open as well as my mind..thanks

ooo well... you have expalined very nicely about what happens and even happening in the families in your poem... and its true.... Its really nice-1.

Ver nice poem........I really love it's uniqueness

There is definite push and pull mechanism It is equally good to have bond in humanism

Remain only in name and blood relation. complex families of today with marriage and re-marriage. A child is more demanding looking for a mentor, sometimes they seem like vampires they want all our energy and time. What a difference a kind word can make, better than a material gift. Children only want to be acknowleged to be a part of something. There is a lot of thought about children in a family and strive. I think we all deal with these, my family circle gets smaller by blood, and larger by transcending friendships. Why set limitations to blood only.

This is a good poem... it is honest about family relations in the world today, at which most people tend to overlook... I like it a lot

They argue it as syndrome of blood relation Is it matter of convenience or though elevation? It is not difficult to understand in simple context/////// very good poem....10

Bible charactor Cain said that he is not the keeper of his brother.The first dropp of deception.

They argue it as syndrome of blood relation Is it matter of convenience or though elevation? ......it is convience only and nothign else....10

It is not difficult to understand in simple context We let it pass of ignorantly as mere pretext... it is our ignorance that comes on the way.10 read mine... how r u

still family bond remains a complete addiction.....This addiction is the root cause of all problems. We can't give up and we can't stay together. This is the great Indian dilemma.Burying the hatchet and coming together forgetting all the differences is the only answer. A good insightful poem.

'The entire relation hangs on bare thread No one bothers to understand or read Elders try for patch and plead Elders go in different direction and try to lead' A poem with a very moral message

Commendable work...Intriguing storyline...valuable message...FjR

a beautiful presentation of blood relation and social life, setting it in modern context.

sometimes blood are unable to work and only friedship become vital......but we usually expect more than usual from blood relations., ....and find syndromes in our blood

'Brother to brother act as sworn enemy The relation goes on vane simply for money Parents watch helplessly and condemn the move They often curse the luck but unable to prove..' That's true. Well said. Nice poem Thanks for sharing with me