Friday, December 7, 2012

A Blissful Write Comments

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She came stealing in,
Fused in my sense and Soul.
Rain drops still drummed
Over the thick green leaves,
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Tajudeen Shah
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Asif Andalib 08 December 2012

Beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it

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Xelam Kan™ 07 December 2012

Full of passions, And delights immense. Intelligence and wisdom Played not much a role (sure Sir) ........... indeed a blissful write and Great penned from a very artistic soul...... sure to be marked with high grades.....inspite of all its charms the most gracious thing of this splendid verification i met is its structure....remarkably run on discourse with fabulous rhyming that tuned melodious like Keats'nightingale or wordsworth prelude......... Full of romance and adorned with some sweet fancies Making deep imoression on minds and souls....... Worthy to be loved..... look at the scene.... Whispers made us settle The arguments of moods. Her lips moistened, eyes Lost links to her brain, It seemed, as she boarded Wings of winds and waves .... Searched and found a pen, With quivering fingers She started a writing, Until the last dropp of Ink filled was done! mind blowing............

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