Saturday, July 12, 2008

! A Blind Eye Comments

Rating: 2.8

I should have seen the signs -
Your need to control all things
Your ego running rampant
You're such an important figure
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Linda Ori
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James Timothy Jarrett 23 May 2009

Your poem truly states the underlying emotion. Not in the words but as an undercurrent running through them. Well done

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 February 2009

A blind eye sees so many hurdles to come.

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Ivor Hogg 13 July 2008

Aisle Altar Hymn the wedding ceremony does not always fortell happiness

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Thad Wilk 13 July 2008

Another conquest on his list, because of love, the sign's were missed! *10*! ! Best wishes Linda! Splendid read! ! Friend Thad

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

Well, this is the classic story repeated over and over again. A woman marries a man believing she can change him. I don't think I've ever heard a man say he married a woman expecting her to change. In fact, the woman sometimes does change. Leaving the man, married to a stranger. You constructed it well and wrote with clarity. Can't expect anything more. GW62

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 July 2008

Yet one day they will take you down......... Truth of life it goes on........very nicely expressed in a poetic way

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Danny Reynolds 12 July 2008

I guess it's hard to leave it to Karma, to repay those who ride roughshod across the trail of broken hearts?

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