I should have seen the signs -
Your need to control all things
Your ego running rampant
You're such an important figure
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Aisle Altar Hymn the wedding ceremony does not always fortell happiness
Another conquest on his list, because of love, the sign's were missed! *10*! ! Best wishes Linda! Splendid read! ! Friend Thad
Well, this is the classic story repeated over and over again. A woman marries a man believing she can change him. I don't think I've ever heard a man say he married a woman expecting her to change. In fact, the woman sometimes does change. Leaving the man, married to a stranger. You constructed it well and wrote with clarity. Can't expect anything more. GW62
Yet one day they will take you down......... Truth of life it goes on........very nicely expressed in a poetic way
I guess it's hard to leave it to Karma, to repay those who ride roughshod across the trail of broken hearts?
Your poem truly states the underlying emotion. Not in the words but as an undercurrent running through them. Well done