Eye sockets mere bruises
Alike to closed fists
Save whole being tangled
In his last rags
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All else dissolves but the basic need to feed oneself.....The bitter truth of hunger and poverty rattles our souls.a very poignant poem.
a touching and thoughtful work, in every city there are beggars and the world is deaf to their cries. Thank you for remembering those lost.
Rattling his soul As a broken alms bowl, .touching imagery
Another brilliant masterpiece from a genius. Thumbs up for this remarkable piece of creativity.
Unable to knock open A deaf world's door... This and other expressions especially in the second stanza, a very well-writ piece
This is a very dark piece. Hopelessness, poor state of life, and all in this sort are the images reading this work brings upon one's thought. I love poems of this kind, and this is a good one.
Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The following lines are much impressive. As a broken alms bowl, Unable to knock open A deaf world's door To go out of this life- Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Such powerful imagery, Yoonoos. The raging fists, striking out for dignity...A terrific verse.
A very sad poem of the situation that is becoming all to common? .......well written Yoonoos
a very touching write..'A deaf world 's door...lovely
Eye sockets mere bruises Alike to closed fists A vase dripping away Holding time's finger... Rattling his soul As a broken alms bowl, Conscious how immense Is oneself without walls.....rich in description though the beggar is poor.... I am honoured to have a comment on my poem by you who is an honourable and esteemed poet...thank you sir
A poignant piece of poetry! Liked the last stanza most............................................10
Great craft work in this immensely expressed poem...I vote 10+++
It is so beautiful poem on blind beggar having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.10
Brilliant poem, not only must we help the poor, homeless and unwanted, we must aim to eradicate poverty and homelessness. A brilliant poem, thank you.