Saturday, October 13, 2007

A Blind Beggar Comments

Rating: 4.4

Eye sockets mere bruises
Alike to closed fists
Save whole being tangled
In his last rags
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David Wood 12 December 2020

Brilliant poem, not only must we help the poor, homeless and unwanted, we must aim to eradicate poverty and homelessness. A brilliant poem, thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 27 May 2020

All else dissolves but the basic need to feed oneself.....The bitter truth of hunger and poverty rattles our souls.a very poignant poem.

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Anjandev Roy 27 May 2020

This is superb piece.....thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Milos Jovanka 25 March 2020

a touching and thoughtful work, in every city there are beggars and the world is deaf to their cries. Thank you for remembering those lost.

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 04 October 2019

touching and beautiful writing

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Rattling his soul As a broken alms bowl, .touching imagery

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Uche Nwanze 02 September 2019

Another brilliant masterpiece from a genius. Thumbs up for this remarkable piece of creativity.

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Abdulrauf Muhammad 26 August 2019

A fascinating and also sad poetry, well spoken

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 August 2019

Unable to knock open A deaf world's door... This and other expressions especially in the second stanza, a very well-writ piece

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Bonaventure Onuabuchi 13 April 2019

This is a very dark piece. Hopelessness, poor state of life, and all in this sort are the images reading this work brings upon one's thought. I love poems of this kind, and this is a good one.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2019

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The following lines are much impressive. As a broken alms bowl, Unable to knock open A deaf world's door To go out of this life- Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 17 February 2019

Such powerful imagery, Yoonoos. The raging fists, striking out for dignity...A terrific verse.

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Tom Allport 10 February 2019

A very sad poem of the situation that is becoming all to common? .......well written Yoonoos

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 January 2019

a very touching write..'A deaf world 's door...lovely

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Christina Chin 13 December 2018

Lovely poem! ! Well crafted! ! Talented!

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Luz Hanaii 16 September 2018

Very touching and well penned work. TFS

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Indira Renganathan 28 July 2018

Eye sockets mere bruises Alike to closed fists A vase dripping away Holding time's finger... Rattling his soul As a broken alms bowl, Conscious how immense Is oneself without walls.....rich in description though the beggar is poor.... I am honoured to have a comment on my poem by you who is an honourable and esteemed poet...thank you sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2018

A poignant piece of poetry! Liked the last stanza most............................................10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 03 July 2018

Great craft work in this immensely expressed poem...I vote 10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

It is so beautiful poem on blind beggar having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.10

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