Friday, November 30, 2012

A Blessed Fate. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first raindrop on my nose tip
Landed after her long-fated trip!
A crystal crown at first-fall emerged,
And many a rainbows blossomed!
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Tajudeen Shah
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* Sunprincess * 17 September 2014

.....very nice...I always like rain poems.....

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Tirtho Banerjee 30 November 2012

This is superb. Thanks Tajudeen for sharing it

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Vijay Sai R 30 November 2012

marvellous depiction...full of imagery

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Vipins Puthooran 30 November 2012

'tis a very beautiful poem with good rhythm of words and expression! ! ! Top marksss! ! ! !

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Absolute poetic splendour carved out in apt diction indeed! The beauty of your lines has the touch of Arnold`s rare vision. As the convention has it on you, the image of God and your thankfulness to His bounty are rather a part of your humility perhaps. Keep it up and flourish for all of us.

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