A Bleak Dream Comments

'Trying to grab you but myself fade away Leaving only the scar in the hall Of the bleak dream Writing your name, me and her' - The poem ends with a beautiful note, nice imagery.

Imagination at it's best... keep writing.

Beautiful poem, Niken. Thank you for sharing

the imagination is very clear and beautiful.. Thank you for sharing...

very nice and a beautiful poem10

nice poem......well written.............

vow! beautiful imagination. good write.enjoyed reading it. voted10 surya

I was looking in it once again All dismissed and gone Trying to grab you but myself fade away Leaving only the scar in the hall Of the bleak dream Writing your name, me and her..... all dreams... bleak dream never come true....fine write and good imagination too.....10 read mine'all dreams not come true' and o.mothr...

Very beautiful poem. Classical. I agree with Ahmed.

I feel William Blake can smile to this piece!

nice work bro, imajine the game imagine what you want

Hi Niken, the bleak dream could be true or false.......or just a dream..the game of sleep! Nice works!

Captivating images...well done.10 sathya narayana