A Blatant Lie Comments

He lied to me on every occasion... reason to feel very bad... good poem......10

Even your enemy may not stab you from the back He may be your sworn enemy but not attack It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla

v He lied to me on every occasion I had all the reservations but no confusion He was do close to me and very good friend.. it affects our morale too...10

I hate lying, hypocrisy and betrayal! ! Indeed a meaningful and beautiful poem! keep it up :)

He lied to me on every occasion I had all the reservations but no confusion He was do close to me and very good friend I saw good opportunity to change him at the end .. it can can create wrong impression...10

wow! this rhyme scheme is amazing, it creates musicality out of nowhere. This poem is outstanding. its long and yet not boring.

This is amazing. I really like it.

Remarkable write with nice message and wisdom

Lies and untruth mostly comes from people we trust and close and that's nature they will take our love and care for ride & granted. ' We shut our eyes when realize the gravity We may soon find out its utility It may not find favor for its continuity There develops cracks in unity' the most real expression and i really happy to read this poem over and over again. It is so simple yet complicated caused everybody hide their betrayal deep within themself and shall have no confession from them ever. Believe me, your poem is 100% tally with what I use to face, betrayal frm friends & family and it's hurt me most. They are worst than our enemy and you put it in simple words that they are back-stabber and that's fact nobody can deny. excellent as the most real to the type of betrayal and treason frm close friend or family. 10 for you.

i can't rmb where i've read this from but a poet once said this, 'an honest friend is the best thing and an honest enemy the next best.' i agree and i think this poem brings this idea out very nicely. :)

Good poem with a lot of wisdom. I appreciate honesty perhaps more than anything else. Honesty is a sign of true friendship Even if the liar seems to ahve some short term gains The cost of peace of mind is never worth it. Thanks for sharing this poem